This the evaluation that I have produced for the final product that I have created for my final major project.



Revised Lower Thirds

After showing my final edit to my tutor she suggested to alter my lower thirds by having them appear on the screen, rather than having any motion effects as it was to distracting when viewing. After re-editing my lower thirds and watching my final edit with them added in I am in agreement that it suits the tone of the documentary much more.

Title Change

After my tutor suggested to change my title from ‘A Slice of Paradise’ to ‘The Good Life’ (a 70s sitcom) I decided to look into what this comedy was about. I found out that it was also about pensioners living their lives in retirement, so I have taken the suggest onboard and changed my title.